Audience power essay learner response
Mathusan-
WWW- Your blog is
very impressive as you have managed to keep on top of all the work and do all
your homework. I think that you sometimes struggle to get the concepts when we
learn them in class so I would make sure you take care to read the blog after each
lesson and re-read the notes so that you can revise the terminology and make
sure you are confident with each new theory. You use all your own words which
shows a real effort.
Your actual essay
is a bit vague with detail and is lacking media language (use your glow words to
help you) but your attention on the question is very good and you focus well on
the task in hand.
EBI- Your
introduction is not saying anything other than you are going to talk about
advantages and disadvantages – what you need to do is write another
introduction and include actual examples of these advantages and disadvantages
– talk about how kids can see information and material that is inappropriate
for them, cyber bullying, trolling etc. Talk about positives too such as being
able to access more choice.
LR- Redo your
introduction and you need to look back over the blog and identify any missing
areas – you need to analyse a film poster (one of the earlier tasks) and you
have not published your work on reception theory (last homework given). Please
try and use media terminology more.
I strongly agree with this statement. From the late 20th century to the present 21st century,the media has played a significant role in our lives. Providing a form of entertainment, education and escape. I also agree because now the consumers can also get so see what the producers can see.
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